Webcomic Review: Dark River

I used to hate twitter, I didn't understand its purpose at all. However, once I started gryphonknights.com with Sean, & D, it was evident that social media was going to be an extremely important. Since starting our Twitter account (gryphonknights, naturally), I've discovered more and more webcomics.

A couple of months ago, I tripped over digital rock and stumbled across a book called Dark River. Popping open the page, I was met with text. In our image saturated world, the written word has become cheap, and can often alienate visitors. However, these words were bright green,eye-catching, and strewn across a painted starscape; an excellent choice for luring in readers.

The crew of a ship sucked into a Plodt Hole tries to ground themselves and find their way home while navigating misguided scientists and an endangered race of cyborgs. It is a sci-fi adventure similar in tone to Star Trek: Voyager, but peppered with Douglas Adams humor. The panel per page layout, that seems to be becoming more popular with webcomics, makes the story move quickly. It is easy to become immersed, as the layout leads for quick pacing that at times seems like an animated experience.

I can't really criticize the storytelling it, as I along with others helped craft it. In fact, you too could help continue creating this book. Occasionally the book will come to a point where it asks readers how the story should continue. As entertainment becomes more realistic, it still seems to be lacking in interactivity. While the homages and parodies to Star Trek are fun, the humor and ability to make choices keep things entertaining.  I only wish  that the story  branched off into multiple directions like a "Choose Your Own Adventure."

Dark River is a great example where accepting a set of limitations can set you apart and help create a solid work of art. While the artwork seems like it is created on paint and is really rough, the artist makes it work by embracing his limitations and being consistent. His green overlay and color scheme really engages the eye. The pages where you have to choose is the treat, as you are greeted by a panel that almost seems painted, really visually rewarding. I am looking forward to continuing to contribute and seeing how this book evolves over time.

Sir Thomas J. Griffin is an artist and space alien working for GryphonKnights Comics. He's illustrated books like Greasers in Geese , Hero, The Only Choice, Meanwhile, and others.

He wonders if his own crew in The WOW Signal! will ever find their own way home.

WOW! Signal Rebirth

WOW Signal was a fun title to create. I may have mentioned before that I started it to force myself to learn how to draw and color digitally. I started working on the computer about 8 months ago using both adobe photoshop and Illustrator.

Since then, from trial and error and watching tutorial videos online I've had great leaps in my ability. I finished work on the first issue of the Wow Signal which ended up being 15 pages long. I then started work on the second issue. Those first 3 pages of the second issue looked so much better then the first that I decided that I wanted to go back and re-illustrate the first issue of the WOW! Signal so that the style and the images were consistent. I also decided to tweak some of the story telling.

April 2013

If you check the images on the right you can see the difference from the first time I drew the starship Namalsadirah and the second. I also have become better at creating space locales and planets.

A lot of what I learned was often details can help create a complete and realistic image.

December 2013

Taking time to recreate the first issue, has helped me appreciate the amount of growth I've experienced and enjoy the new work that I have been creating.

You can see more of my artwork @ http://sirgryphon.deviantart.com/art/Rebirth-of-the-Namalsadirah-420593958

You can also read my book WOW! SIGNAL and other free comics at http://www.gryphonknights.com/

EVOLUTION: Uniforms

First page created on computer

When I first started Wow! Signal, I had a very good concept of what I wanted to write about and where I wanted to go with it. What I didn't have was any designs for the book, and very little experience drawing on the computer.

My first attempt at a page was alright and in fact this page was a test to see how my abilities reflected to the computer and was later integrated in the story. My control was really thrown off as I was used to working with pen paper and marker and paint. However,  having a story that continued and a deadline that I was supposed to meet pushed me to keep creating pages.

The one thing I decided, since this was a free comic was that I would allow the design of certain elements to evolve. The most major example was in the uniforms. In the book the uniforms were a different shades of purple and that was it. I understand that consistency is great to have, but evolution I feel is also good. I feel like sometimes books can get stuck, and some books retcon too much. All I wanted to do was allow my designs to grow with my ability. As you can see, I really got the knack at working on the computer, and not only that, but I allowed myself to refine and improve the designs of the uniforms.adding a mix of the violet, and a Gray-blue color for the majority of it as well as cybernetic boots. My feelings were that I wanted the uniforms to be more modular so you could equip them with whatever you needed for the task at hand.

I've been playing around with growing from this as well but I don't think its necessary at this time. The ship the Namalsadirah also changed over time but I will talk about that another time. I hope you continue to enjoy The Wow! Signal.